Ghost Dance
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Ghost Dance
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The
Crimson Dust
The sky over the Dragoon Mountains held a death grip on the sun, like a double eagle squeezed in the hand of a miner with the booze shakes hunting for a drink. When the sun dipped low behind the thunderheads rolling in, the horizon turned the color of a fresh bruise on a whore’s face. The mountains held the heat, trapped and suffocating until an hour after the last sliver of light vanished, sending up rays—godly or devilish, depending on where you stood.
That was when the spirits crawled out, and the white man retreated into whatever structure his luck could afford. Some had a wool blanket or a buffalo skin; others had what they called a mansion, though in any respectable town, it’d be labeled a broke-down shotgun shack. But the gulch was anything but respectable. It took pride in its slovenly, filthy ruts of open sewage, rats, and assorted grotesqueries.
Down in the basin, the earth had been torn open, raped by water cannons that spat a foul, poisonous slag. Any man who’d been pulling copper from that dirt long enough turned into a simpleton—some so bad they couldn’t speak, their hands shaking enough to make late-stage pox look like a pleasant row on a shady pond. It was a jagged, red wound where the miners clawed at the rock until blood seeped from their fingers.
Dysentery was rampant, as were all the other melodies of the plains. A particularly nasty outbreak of smallpox, combined with the dysentery, put a man in the ground in a few short, lonely days. They dealt with the dying with what they presumed was mercy, leaving them where the Apaches would find ‘em, hoping the sickness would follow the warriors home. And the dust— oy the dust! it didn’t just float. It owned the lungs of every man in camp, coat-ing teeth an’ tongues in a grit that tasted of ancient, greened copper an’ dry sweat.
Carl the Butcher stood outside his shack, hacking at a slab of salt pork that looked like weathered wood an’ tasted like maggots an’ sandpaper latrine. The rhythm of his cleaver was the only steady thing in a town built on fever dreams. He wiped a hand across his forehead, leaving a streak of red clay behind.
“Oi, Danny! Stop gawking at the ridge an’ get these scraps to the swine,” Carl barked, not looking up. “Me boots are sinking into the muck an’ I ain’t in the mood for lollygagging. Move it, or I’ll be finding a use for your hide on the drying rack.”
Carl was an old man of the sea, a London fireplug of a man no more than five-foot-two, but not a man to be tangled with under any circumstances. He gambled like a cheap drunk, always losing any money he made before it even touched his palm. Born in the depths of the East End, he bore a thick Cockney accent to prove it, speaking through gritted teeth with a face that matched the ugliness of his English bulldog, Charles. It was an ironic name, seeing as Carl hated the royalty. He was a Republican from Dublin, had a hand in a number of bombings, which was why he was out at this ass-end of the civilized world.
Carl went by “Butch” or “Butcher.” He was a brutal man, a gangster who’d gone on the lam from London to escape a past that followed him even to New York. Hacked pigs apart he did, or buffalo, or whatever meat came under his hands. A hard-drinking man, which accounted for the lacking of both his index fingers—one at the first knuckle, one at the second. But he was no worse than the barber, Josh Cody, who had a collection of ears in a bag he’d “accidentally” snipped off. I say accidentally with a grain of salt, considering the scars on Cody’s face from shrapnel in the War Between the States. Whether or not it was indeed an accident is a matter of no small amount of debate in the many taverns that were more plentiful than any other kind of establishment within the town.
But Carl. He wouldn’t touch fish. Being a Yid, he considered fish treif, yet had no problem eating swine. He was particular about his pork, though, choosing only what the Chinamen in the camp provided. He’d always been an outcast, even among his own people. His job was essential, but the handling of blood an’ carcasses created a paradox—a distance that wasn’t exclusive to the Yids, but perhaps a bit more pronounced, like their noses.
The man who handles the filth is indispensable, but he is not always the one you invite to the head of the table for the reading of the Talmud. Carl figured if the swine was chopped small enough and mixed into noodles or chop suey, it was no longer swine, but Chinese food. He reasoned that fish carried awful illnesses, which was true enough out on the plains. It’d take less than an hour for a fish to grow maggots in the desert heat, whereas the swine or buffalo was quickly tossed in the smokehouse and cured of all flavor to the point of utter unpalatability, unless you soaked it in brine for an hour before boiling it for three more. But there you go—or as he would say, “Bob’s yer uncle.”
Upon the rim of the canyon, invisible to the men coughing their guts out in the pits, stood a ghostly figure wrapped in the silence of the stone. He wore a mountain lion skin to hold off the heat of the high noon mountains and keep him warm when the desert air turned from scorching to freezing in less than an hour after the sun fell below the rim of the Western plains. The desert shed heat quicker than a duck shed water. To the miners, the ridge was just a boundary of the claim; for Apache, it was a rib of the world, have fundamental structural underpinning of existence, built of grandfather rocks that had been there since time began. Before the White Buffalo. Before the enigma. Before the invaders and Interlopers from across the big water.
Up there, a warrior named Doe’tséhútaa–No Bull in the American translation looked down with a stoic seething for the men encroaching on the sacred space below the Rib of the Earth. The air up there didn’t smell of woodsmoke or sweat. It carried the faint, electric scent of a storm blowing in from the northwest—a hot wind signifying that it was going to be a bad one. Not just thunder and’ lightning, but little tornadoes that could grow into big ones, lifting a hundred buffalo into the air and tossing them half a mile like a child throwing a tantrum in the air that was otherwise as cool and pleasant as a drawing room or a Sunday School in fall. It was said that following such a storm, fish and frogs would fall from the sky like rain into the muddy plains, turning the land into a feast for the coyote and’ a festering scab for the earth.
To No Bull, this was a sign—a noise from the spirit. It was something he had danced for, for three days. He spoke into the dark, his voice quiet an’ raspy.
“Hello, grandmother storm. You are welcome.”
He went silent again, his laconic eyes gazing out over the darkening horizon. It was a shift in the spirit that the white men down below could not feel, even as it crawled up their spines as surely as a rattlesnake slithering into a boot to find warmth, only to bite the foot that offered it hospitality.
In the center of the boomtown, the only building with a finished coat of paint and a proper shithouse behind it housed the offices of the San Pedro Mining Company. Like every other building in the territory, it was painted “International Red”—a cheap, rust-colored surplus bought from the forts that dotted the perimeter. The rest of the town was a foul sewer running down the middle of the main drag, every tent, leanto, an’ miner’s backside spewing effluence into it.
The desperados who showed up here were mostly running from the hangman’s noose, a shitty life, or a shitty wife. About a quarter of these greenhorns would die within a year, and to be honest, I was no different. Indeed death had come to me quite young. But again, that is a different story for a different time.
Yeah, that’s right—I’m telling this story from hell, literally. Perhaps more accurately, if I was to be perfectly correct, I was actually in a completely different place than hell which was, according to the legends, quite a bit worse than what the priests and nuns taught in the church. But that’s yet another story, one I’ll put down in yet another book if I can just find more paper.
Time I have. Forever if I need it–ye gads forbid. This is my punishment, my torture, and my absolution—a confessional to the Catholic God that renounced me at birth. Beelzebub is generous with the paper for this sole work and this sole work alone. Anything else besides this story is strictly verboten. Paper is for those that are punished and so to write for pleasure I have to sneak it in with my poetry I suppose; he likes to see me suffer through memories. The visceral shift in my hips as I squirm through the pages. Don’t tell him, but it’s actually a relief to get this all off my chest. I hear tell some people get the hell out of this forgotten and forsaken dusty place. I never saw it happen, and though I do not have any proof that they do not you can not prove a negative irregardless. Sorry. Regardless. Old Mr B tells me that *irregardless” is not a word. Had no idea. Regardless, I guess where I am is what they used to call purgatory in Sunday school. There is no heat like the hell proper what the bloated old queers in the dresses up on the stage in the theater of the false prophet used to call it when they preached about it, and to be perfectly honest and as precise as I can be, the food is not that bad here in the damn halls of my prison; a prison, incidentally, and which I am free to roam about to a certain extent, and parts of it are in fact quite lovely. By Beelzebub’s Grand Palace there are nice gardens that you can see into but you can’t go in and there are no seats nearby to simply look at and be wistful for grass and trees. The trees are all dead but remind me of those melancholy cold days where the sky was dead white back in New Orleans. In fact the accommodations overall are not that bad. The bed is a bit smaller than I would have at home as I typically push two or three mattresses together to form a superbad that is nearly 6 ft wide and 6 ft long. An enormity that can accommodate a half a dozen friends for some romping fun. But here there is no need for such things. I have no urges whatsoever any longer as that is part of the neutrality of this place. I suppose if I go down Satan’s repository of souls, the land of the devil himself. , You have still have to eat, earn a living wherever the hell it is that I am. For me it is writing. For some it is painting pictures, for others it is sculpting, for others and is using pencils to draw out the story of their life or simply acting you t out as best they can. These are typically the mode of contrition for the illiterate in life. But again, that is a whole different matter. I have to fill a hundred million words, thus spake Beelzebub. To put this into a kind of perspective, the longest books in the world might have been, perhaps as much as a few hundred thousand words– maybe a thousand pages. If I get a little purple with my prose or digress for overly detailed in my character sketches and descriptions of scenes it’s all for my own self. It is for my entertainment and my sanity and the offloading of my guilt and the reminiscing of life and, in the most practical sense, to fill up the paper. At two hundred fifty words per page (if I write small and tightly kearned) that will amount to something like four hundred thousand pages. If this ever gets into the hands of someone on earthly paper, I hope they have the good sense to cut out the long, meaningless bits meant only for Mr B who likes to see every painful detail, down to bowel movements, sneezes and farts, and most of all sex, a practice that I did not indulge in even in life. Not that I didn’t want it, but I didn’t want the headache of women who were, to me, went in a relationship, nothing but a gigantic pain in my ass. And the remedy for it particularly in that sour and sick little village in the middle of nowhere was more or less a long-term death sentence. It was a death at the hands of all kinds of boxes that came from the ladies’ poor tainted nethers. I didn’t scorn them. I pitied them. They were the ruined women from the cities would pick up the pox there and were this relegated to ever worsening circumstances until they landed here just before their terminus in a shallow grave if they were lucky.
These miners, whores, shepherds and assorted other losers and malcontents, all collected in one place, made for a dangerous and volatile mix of dynamite, ghost farts and syphilis– that, incidentally, just about everybody in town had from the horrors of the pussy available at Trixie’s joint.
Anyhow.
Call me Alvin.
It went something like that. He wrote some pretty good poems, that fellow, that wrote about wailing and traveling amongst the islands of the South Pacific which I never got to see in life. Alas. And I often wonder how my life would be if I had taken to the Sea instead of the desert as an escape route from my dark past. I suppose, as the phrase goes, live and learn., I suppose in my case, die and learn. As for poetry, it’s a good way to get laid and I’m fairly good at it having been a well-read little fucker, and so I did quite well having a side hustle selling the sonnets and verses for a small fee. A dime for a haiku–which was a kind of Jap poem that consisted of a total of seventeen words, no more, no less; a quarter for a single stanza sonnet and so on. I once wrote an entire play not unlike Love’s ,Laborers Lost by the old bard, merely transposing names and changing up the events as and the locations for a rich fella–a young dude named Charlie Kain I knew–a slick New York City newspaper man who was rich from a gold mine in Colorado amen amen – incidentally the Colorado Lode – for two hundred shekels. a good turn of phrase. But again, I digress. First, here’s one of my poems before we get back into the story:
Trapped in the middle,
Paying for me worldly sins,
Cleansing a stained soul.
The weight of the past,
A confession made with tears,
To the silent walls.
No heaven in sight,
Just the waiting in the dark,
Till the debt is paid.
A good Catholic,
Kneeling down before the truth,
Telling everything.
Through the mist he speaks,
Hoping for the final peace,
Waiting for the dawn.
Back to the story at hand, or I’ll never get out of this place — if indeed I can find a way. Those “miners,” they just wanted to not be found. One more thing, so you know: you can tell perfectly well I do not have the perfect vocabulary, nor do I have the good grammar or the correct punctuation. If you find a stray comma or a bad use of a semicolon, you might forgive a man for his foibles an’ weaknesses. But there you go. As me good friend Carl the Butcher Battleheim used to say in his Cockney way: Bob’s yer uncle. I don’t know what the hell that means, but there you have it.
These miners, all collected in one place, made for a dangerous an’ volatile mix of dynamite, ghost farts, an’ syphilis—that, incidentally, just about everybody in town had from the horrors of the pussy available at Trixie’s joint.
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Witherspoon. The name says it all. It wasn’t Horowitz or Gagliano Or O’Shaughnessy or Juarez. It sounded like money for fuck’s sake. He certainly smelled like money if you got close enough to get through the scent of expensive scotch and bank vaults. He was a rich adventurer who was among the very first to show up here and the one that had the know-how and the skills and the college education and the chemistry set to figure out that there was copper in our hills and he suspected that was probably gold deeper in and probably silver too, but the Apache line was pretty strong still back then, and that’s what the story will be about, the insidious slow murder of a nation of people that are noble and beautiful and know how to live with the world without taking from it, more giving.
The Red Man is a beautiful thing. Graceful, great horsemen and the Apaches are particularly so. Resilient to heat, resilient to any kind of undue burden or hardship, small or large, that might befall them except for the white man with their guns and booze and syphilis, and of course the pox. And like the buffalo they are now nearly gone and the West was no longer the West, but rather a graveyard where the ghost dances and the sundances and the rain dances still happen in the spirit world. And, to be sure, the shadow people that wear the stripes and the tall hats that hide in the shadows are certainly real, and I suppose in part this book is a testament to my deep and abiding contrition. All this I say is predicated by the fact that I was an Indian warrior under Jackson’s watch and I too got my fill of killing of the Red Man to the point of nausea that is unbearable, which is why I feel no shame in having to serve out my time here, however long that might be. Contrition is an emotion that does not deplete quickly. If it takes it a millennium for an eon for me to sweat out my sins, which, when viewed in the shadow of the truly monstrous killers strewn about history’s horrific machinery and mechanics I see now that slavery and murder and a word I just coined–unicide–the systematic destruction of a single race of people rather than the murder of a king in the act of regicide or a brother in the act of fratricide. These were not individual murders, but more accurately an extermination, treating a people, culture unto itself like no more than rats, like no more than the bison that we also exterminate for no other reason than the pleasure of watching them die. But the cover, the fig leaf as it were covering their shame in the wholesale slaughter and dislocation of a people who have been here since God put them here is the most insidious evil that humankind could perpetrate on his fellow human.
When these people, the people that we’re set down in this place by the hand of the creator, if you believe such things, or if you choose to believe in the science that has recently come out
And that is all I have to say for now on that subject. So, I found myself inside Witherspoon’s office and truth be told, the air inside his offices was unnaturally, indeed unbearably still. Fire worse than the stuffiness even of my current position in wherever it is that I am. Oh here comes Beelzebub so I better get back to the storytelling and not the pontification.
Alvin speaks his truth,
With a tongue both sharp and rough,
Learned from Captain Jack.
Nautical and deep,
Mixing salt with holy prayers,
Confessing his soul.
The wrong side he fought,
Carrying a heavy heart,
Seeking for the light.
A learned man’s mind,
Using words like polished stones,
Thrown in common mud.
To the priest he turns,
Bearing all his secret sins,
Telling every bit.
And one other thing, I just randomly write poems down like I said, cuz old Mr B over there who’s looking over my shoulder likes to see me write at the poems what he says he takes credit for. Which is certainly true, aingt it Mr B? Oh he is in the mood today.
Witherspoon sat behind a desk of polished mahogany that had traveled three thousand miles to be here. He was currently staring at a map where the red ink of the “indigenous zones” bled into the blue ink of the “mineral rights.” He adjusted his spectacles, the glass catching the dying light of the afternoon.
“The logistics are undeniable,” Witherspoon murmured to the empty room. “If we shift the perimeter of the northern shaft by a mere five hundred yards, the output increases by thirty percent. The fact that it encroaches upon a designated sacred site is a topographical inconvenience, nothing more.”
He dipped his pen into the inkwell and made a sharp, decisive mark on the vellum.
“Precisely so,” he whispered, the words crisp as a new banknote.
Outside, the first drumbeat of the Rain Dance began—a low, thrumming vibration that seemed to come from the belly of the earth rather than a physical instrument. It was a sound that made the ink in Witherspoon’s well ripple, though he didn’t bother to look down.
Alvin (who be me (cuz I’m writing this for posterity (so when I die they can cut this down to a journal but a book that people will read so I told the story in third person))) sat by the communal well, his back to the bustle of the miners. He watched a beetle struggle to climb a blade of parched grass.
“Waking up, the mountain is,” Alvin said to the beetle. “Thirsty for more than water, the red dust remains. Coming, the heavy clouds are, but different, the rain will be.” And see that there? How many talks with the weird backwards kind of way which is cuz I come from German Jewish stock where we talk in a weird way before Mr B sent me right which was no picnic let me tell you.
A wagon train creaked into the square, the oxen blowing in exhaustion. At the head of the lead wagon, Captain Jack pulled on the reins, his knuckles white. Captain Jack was a veteran of the Indian wars under Jackson in the 40s and had obtained his captaincy while in the service of the Confederacy, but had of late renounced that backward belief and come under the wing of the Lincoln mindset. He was an abolitionist to the core, having had his fill of killing people who didn’t have white skin. He looked at the red haze hanging over the town and felt a stuttering in his chest that had nothing to do with his speech.
“B-b-belay the evening camp,” Jack called out, his voice cracking the dry air. “We drop anchor h-h-here. Step lively thar! We’re in the mouth of the furnace now.” And what else about all the extra free words here is that I got to fill 100,000 pages for Mr B before he lets me go whether that’s to hell or not I don’t know. It depends on whether he likes the book. But no one would read a book that was 100,000 pages long so that’s why I’m writing down everything I’m going to say cuz people will read a book that’s 100,000 words.
Captain Jack had led the crew of one of the very earliest steam-driven warships, a ship called Old Ironsides for no better reason than it had iron planks that had been haphazardly foisted onto what had been once a ship that was driven by wind and blood and the sweat of men. Such were the times. The new world was quickly replacing the old. Some people said that since the revolutionary war and the advent of the steam engine but the population of the world had gone from something less than 350 million people to now maybe maybe as many as a billion, a number incomprehensible to any sane person. And God knows what the future held in store. It made perfect sense. Suddenly people could live anywhere and get anywhere and food could get anywhere and be shipped from anywhere. Anywhere anywhere anywhere. Mother fucker.
He hopped down, his boots hitting the red dirt with a thud that felt like a closing door. Behind him, the “passersby” of the trail—the tired, the broken, and the greedy—spilled out into the crimson dust, oblivious to the fact that they were walking onto a stage where the spirits were already taking their seats.
Gester the Guesser leaned against a hitching post, tossing a tarnished nickel into the air. He caught it and pressed it to his eye like a monocle, looking at the newcomers. Guster or Gester, a gnomic like imp of a man, shorter even than Jack, likely due to his upbringing close to a Mercury mine the doc said, was the telegraph operator, the first one to make it that far west and that far south. It was a magical thing to learn of the pending arrival of the various celebrity millionaires who were arriving by the day with the hopes of grabbing up parcels of the valuable land. There were rumors even that a spur from the Southern Pacific rail line would soon be coming to town. There were no promises, which were just as thin as the promises that the territory would soon be a state. Pipe dreams as smokey as the opium the Chinaman sold for a dollar in his store.
“Fresh meat for the grinder!” Gester chirped, a grin cutting through the dust on his face. “Hey, Captain! You want a tip? Don’t sleep with your mouth open. The dust in this town likes to plant seeds in your throat, and by morning, you’ll be spitting copper wire! Ha! A nickel for the warning, or a dime if you want me to tell ya which way the wind is gonna blow tomorrow.”
Gester the guesser– now there was a character. A real meshug as he would say. Which means crazy and Jewish. He grew up in some New York s*** hole called five points and I’ve been there so I know that it’s a s*** hole just as bad as any place out here probably worse. When you put that many people concentrated together black and white and what have you polish Irish German everywhere in the world you get more Dynamite and the day didn’t go by there when at least two or three people weren’t murdered or worse he had a funny way of talking cuz, well because he was a funny guy. You have this way of talking and said he used to do schtick on the stage at one of the lesser theaters in the city. He was smart as a whip and always need is a pin no matter how filthy things got. He was always combobulated and sheveled, which are words that don’t exist but should. Combobulated means having your s*** together and shoveled means you have your clothing looking sharp as a tack. To look at the razor shop lapels on his jacket which was it always spotless and of the latest fashion in this hell hole you think that he could shave with his shirt collar. So practically everything that came out of his mouth was a joke of some kind. He was one of those old yahoodies what spoke as much Yiddish as he spoke English and now I know you just a little bit too and if I seem like I’m given to talking like that from time to time, meh, oy gavultz me mishpoken. Such is love and life out here on the plains where the deer and the antelope die.
Back to business. More writing and less mumbo jumbo.
The drumbeat on the ridge grew louder, a heartbeat for a land that was tired of being bled. The Rain Dance had begun, and the first act was written in the clouds. And No Bull Sleeping” (known as Noble Sleepy (by the illiterate bigots in the camp, which is practically all of them)). had fallen into the trance of dancing under the sun for days on end, taking nothing for a repast, nor sleeping, and taking only small amounts of water when seated in his little barricade of string and bags of tobacco and colorful flags, trophies taken from the early settlers.
Author’s note: I should let you know that I’m looking down at you right now from the year on Earth which is the year of our Lord 1977, and let me tell you there aingt no Lord like you see in the Bible. At least not in the new testament. He’s a lot more like Buddha or a black fella named Rastafarian or something like that. And so those beliefs are what people should be doing. Being peaceful meditating and loving one another and smoking La cucaracha. Jive as I used to call it. Mary Jane was another name it went by and it was rampant as we’re all drugs in the in the camp because it was the only way out of the sheer hell of it. So there’s a lot to get on with and I’m being Way off the Mark again as I am giving to lots of digressions as you can probably already tell but I will in the book when it gets published be only too happy to excise that stuff.
Chapter 2
The Vein of Contention
The mining camp of Desolation Creek didn’t sleep so much as it simmered like a negro cooking up a bowl of gumbo or red beabs or crawdads (and you should know one of the thing about me that I am a boy of the south, a boy of the deep South. New Orleans Louisiana. The greatest City on the planet by my reckoning. And God I do my love a good bowl of soul food. Used to go down and get muffalettas and sit by the piers watch the steamboats go by with all the negro Brothers. Back then though I was distinctly racist I loved the black boys. Noble and handsome and kind and giving. They were the backbone of the South and that’s why I went fighting because I knew that if we didn’t have slaves that things will go south so to speak real fast. But I’m sorry again Mr Sloan Geminis Beelzebub, but you did say 100,000 pages which I figured with my big fat rambling straw is about 200 words per page. Anyway, by midnight, the heat of the day remained trapped in the canyon walls, radiating off the stone like the fever of a dying man from the pox. The only light came from the flickering grease-lamps of the night shift and the distant, rhythmic orange glow of the Apache fires high on the Dragoons.
Witherspoon stood on his balcony, the silk of his robe a cool insult to the stifling air. He held a glass of amber liquid—real scotch, imported and expensive— and watched the silhouettes of the sentries pacing the perimeter.
“The efficiency of the night crew has dropped four percent since the drumming began,” Witherspoon said, not turning as his secretary, a twitchy man named Miller with a bad laudanum and opium habit, entered the room. “The men are spooked. They claim the shadows in the pits are moving against the grain of the lamps.”
“They’re superstitious, sir,” Miller stammered, clutching a stack of manifests. “The ‘Rain Dance’... they think it’s an incantation. A curse on the copper.”
Witherspoon took a slow sip, the ice clinking against the crystal. “A curse is merely an unquantifiable variable, Miller. We do not manage variables; we eliminate them. If the drumming continues to affect the bottom line, I shall have the Colonel move the encampment further into the foothills. Precisely so.”
Down in the muddy artery of the main drag, Captain Jack was struggling with a stubborn mule that refused to budge from the center of the road. The beast’s eyes were rolled back, fixed on the peaks above.
“B-b-belay that nonsense, ye stubborn bucket of glue!” Jack hissed, his boots sliding in the muck. “Step lively thar, or I’ll have Carl turn ye into Wednesday’s special!”
He stopped, his breath coming in ragged hitches. The air felt thick, charged with a static that made the hair on his arms stand up. He leaned his head against the mule’s flank and began the whisper, the words a low hum beneath the sound of the distant drums:
The mountain breathes a heavy sigh,
Beneath a dark and starless sky,
The iron sleeps within the deep,
While shadows through the valley creep,
And ancient kings their vigils keep.
He straightened up, the stutter vanished from his jaw. “Now, move, ye mangy dog. There’s a storm coming that don’t care about your temperament.”
Gester watched the Captain from the porch of the general store, whittling a piece of cedar into a sharp point. He didn’t look up as Alvin approached, his footsteps making no sound on the warped boards.
“A bad time to be a mule,” Gester remarked, flicking a wood shaving into the street picking his teeth with the sharp end he made. “They see what we don’t. They know the earth isn’t a bank vault you can just pick the lock on. You want fucken a tip, Alvin? The miners think they’re digging for god damn wealth, really just digging a hole big enough for the whole town to fall into. Ha! That first one free, seeing as you’re the only one here with a lick of Goddamn sense.”
Alvin looked past Gester, his eyes reflecting the orange flickers from the mountain.
“To the rock, the spirit speaks oy glaven,” Alvin murmured. “Listening, the white man is not, the meshug putzes. Taking the copper, they are, but the price, oy! they have not seen. Paying in blood, the miners will be, Zolst vaksn vi a tsibele, mitn kop in drerd! when the sky its debt collects.
“What the hell did you just say you dirty little Jew?”
“Ach mi mischpoken. In the ground like an onion your head should grow.”
The drumming stopped.
The silence that followed was heavier than the noise had been. It was a vacuum that sucked the breath out of the camp. In the sudden quiet, a new sound emerged—a low, melodic chanting that seemed to vibrate through the soles of everyone’s boots.
It was the Rain Dance reaching its crescendo. On the ridge, the Apache dancers moved in a circle that mirrored the path of the stars. They weren’t just asking for water; they were reminding the land who it belonged to.
Carl the Butcher stepped out of his shop, his apron stained with the day’s work. He looked up at the moon, which hung over the canyon like a pale, unblinking eye.
“Me ears be ringing,” Carl grunted, rubbing his neck. “Like me head’s inside a brass bell. Somethings stirring up thar, n’ it aingt just th’ weather. You feel that, Gester?”
Gester stopped whittling. He looked at the tarnished nickel in his palm. “I feel like I’m holding a winning ticket for a race that hasn’t started yet, Carl. And I’m the only one who knows the horse is dead.”
A single drop of rain fell. It didn’t land on the dust. It landed squarely on Witherspoon’s map, soaking into the red ink of the sacred site, turning the paper into a dark, spreading stain.
The Surveyor’s Chain
The morning seeped into the canyon like gray ink on a wet rag, like the blood of the Earth. The single drop of rain from the night before had been a tease, leaving the air tasting of wet metal and unkept promises.
In the center of the camp, a group of men in blue coats—Bureau of Indian Affairs agents—unfolded a heavy brass transit and a chain made of cold, linked iron. They moved with the stiff, mathematical certainty of men who believed the world could be conquered by a decimal point.
Witherspoon the Cocksucker, what the camp mostly called him by, because he was a cocksucker (both in truth and in spirit) watched them from the shade of his porch, his fingers dancing over the gold watch chain across his bloated out waistcoat. Beside him a man in a dusty frock coat, a surveyor named Higgins, whose eyes were bloodshot from the glare, stood there like a Goddamn saguaro. he was a a complete blank of a man, inscrutable with a thin cruel line for a mouth within, parched lips that were shedding skin like a snake or a lizard. What hair he had left was laying in greasy that he kept hidden underneath a wig that was too obvious to be true. He considered himself a ladies man but the only ladies that would fuck him that took gold, and only gold from him for their services.
Most of Trixie’s women wouldn’t even touch him for a $20 gold pie ce. It was that plug ugly. Whenever Chinese whores saw him coming they would hide. The only woman that would have him for less than $20 was a lady that was so completely insane but the vapors and whatnot that no man in town will touch her, not even for $20 in gold which back then was a fortune.
Mr B is asked me to go on more about that poor old ragged lady, as she is a particularly sore memory for me seeing as how she passed on. And that’s a very polite way of saying it. So let me tell you the story about Mary Jane which ends incidentally right here in this part of the story. She had once been a great beauty in an Arris in New York, but soon, what they called The vapors or the apoplexy it’s overcame her completely, and she was shipped from one asylum to the next, where even they could not keep her under any kind of constraint without copious quantities of laudanum, which was perfectly fine back then, as we didn’t know about things like addiction, but soon her habit became so powerful but the poor bitch, though now sedate, was hopelessly stuck on the junk. She would do anything to get a hands on more and sought more and more powerful forms of the drug and he’ll see landed on the black tar opium that she would melt in a little spoon she had can injected direct into her arms. Oliver veins had turned black and died and her hands withered to the point where they eventually became dangerous from infection and had to be amputated and then her feet went and slowly but surely bits of her body were carved off of her until she was just a head and a body. And this, this poor, rich wretch was finally mercifully put out of her misery in the raid upon our Town that occurred in a subsequent and I will tell you about it in a subsequent chapter. But the Ladies Man soon found himself with a complete payback, that being that his dick dropped off from the clap and from there he went slowly mad as the tiny microbes ate at his brain until he too was a madman addicted to heroin and he too lost many parts of his body due to infections and gangrene. Just desserts. Of course we fed his body to the chinaman’s pigs, as was the fate for anybody that crossed the wrong person in town.
“The line must be absolute, Higgins,” Witherspoon said, his voice as sharp as a razor’s edge. “I want the markers driven into the bedrock. If the Apache claim the spring is within their vision-lands, we simply show them the chain. Numbers do not negotiate. Numbers do not dance. Precisely so.”
Higgins spat a stream of tobacco juice into the red dirt. “They aingt gonna like it, Mr. Witherspoon. That spring is the only reliable water between here and the Gila. If we chain it off for the steam pumps, their horses go thirsty. Thirsty horses make for restless riders,” he wheezed out with his sickening cough that sounded of a wilting bagpipe, or a hot malarial wind.
“Efficiency requires sacrifice,” Witherspoon replied, turning back toward his office. “Usually the sacrifice of others.”
Down by the corrals, Captain Jack was supervising the unloading of the supply wagons. He watched the surveyors with a look of deep-seated dread. Every time the iron chain clinked against a stone, he flinched.
“B-b-belay that hammering!” Jack shouted at a teamster, though his s-s-stutter was catching on his teeth again. “Step lively thar! We need these crates off-loaded before the noon heat turns the wood to t-t-tinder.”
He leaned against the heavy oak wheel of a wagon, his head bowed. The sound of the surveying chain reminded him of the shackles in the hold of a brig, a sound that trailed him like a ghost. He began to whisper, his voice a low, rhythmic thrum:
The iron binds the shifting sand,
A heavy grip upon the land,
The marks are set in stone and salt,
To bring the wandering heart to halt,
And lock the gates of spirits’ hand.
The stutter eased. He looked up and saw Alvin standing ten feet away, watching the surveyors with a stillness that was unnerving.
“Measuring the wind, they are,” Alvin said, his eyes fixed on the brass transit. “To hold the earth with a string, they try. Fools, the white men remain. Ownership, the mountain does not understand. Only the debt, it remembers.”
“They’re just doing their jobs, Alvin,” Jack said, though he didn’t sound like he believed it. “Trying to make a map of a place that don’t want to be mapped.”
“Creating a cage, they are,” Alvin countered. “But the tiger, inside the cage it is not. Watching from the shadows, the tiger is.”
Carl the Butcher walked past, lugging a crate of salt-cured ribs. He stopped to watch Higgins drive a wooden stake into the ground near the town’s only well.
“Hey! You’re blocking me delivery route with that toothpick!” Carl grunted. “Me wagons need room to turn, or me beef’s gonna be sitting in the sun turning into leather. What’s the point of all this string and brass anyway?”
Gester the leaned out of the shadows of the livery stable, a deck of greasy cards in his hand. He flicked a card toward Carl—the Jack of Spades.
“It’s a magic trick, Carl!” Gester laughed, though there was no mirth in it. “They pull a chain across the dirt, and poof! The land that belonged to everyone suddenly belongs to the guy with the biggest hat. You want a tip? Don’t trip over that chain. It’s got a nasty habit of turning into a noose if you stand on the wrong side of the line. Ha! Fifty cents for a reading, or a nickel to know which surveyor is gonna get an arrow in his hat first.”
As the sun climbed higher, the heat began to shimmer off the brass instruments, distorting the landscape. The surveyors looked through their lenses and saw the mountains dancing in the haze, the ridges shifting and blurring as if the Dragoons were trying to shake off the very idea of being measured.
The first act was deepening. The rain had been a warning; the chain was the challenge. And up on the ridges, the Apache were no longer just dancing; they were waiting.
The Scent of Bitter Almonds
The noon sun hung overhead like a white-hot coin, melting the shadows into small, dark pools at the base of every rock. In the copper pits, the air had grown heavy and sweet—a cloying, artificial scent that clung to the back of the throat. It wasn’t the smell of woodsmoke or the dry tang of the desert; it was the smell of the deep earth being violated.
Witherspoon stood at the edge of the northern shaft, a silk handkerchief pressed to his nose. Beside him, a foreman with skin the texture of a walnut pointed into the dark maw of the earth.
“We hit a pocket, sir,” the foreman grunted. “Smells like bitter almonds. The men say it’s the breath of the mountain, trying to poison ‘em for digging too deep. Half the crew has walked off the line, claiming they heard a woman wailing down in the drift.”
Witherspoon didn’t blink. He looked down into the darkness, his eyes cold and analytical. “It is a geological gas pocket, nothing more. A chemical reaction to the exposure of the sulfide ore. Tell the men that if they prefer the smell of poverty to the smell of almonds, they are welcome to leave. But they will find no credit at the company store by nightfall. Precisely so.”
He turned away, the heels of his polished boots clicking a sharp, rhythmic tempo against the shale.
Down in the camp, the “passersby”—a group of Irish laborers and Chinese laundrymen—gathered around the communal pump, their faces masks of red dust and exhaustion. They spoke in hushed tones, their eyes darting toward the ridges where the Apache remained invisible but felt.
“I’m telling ya, it’s a sign,” one miner whispered, his voice a rasp. “First the rain that wasn’t rain, now the smell of a funeral. We’re digging our own graves and paying Witherspoon for the privilege.”
Carl the Butcher stood in the shade of his awning, sharpening a long, curved knife. The screech of metal on stone was the only sound in the sudden, midday lull. He looked up as Gester the Guesser sauntered over, flipping a copper slug between his knuckles.
“You smell that, Carl?” Gester asked, his grin looking more like a scar in the harsh light. “That’s the smell of a secret being told. The mountain is spilling its guts, and it aingt happy about the audience. You want a tip? Don’t eat the beef today. The smell’s gotten into the meat. It’s like eating a bouquet of dead flowers.”
Carl stopped sharpening. He sniffed the air, his nostrils flaring. “Me shop’s clean, Gester. But the air... it feels like it’s curdling. Like milk left in the sun. If that smell don’t clear, me boys won’t be able to tell the difference between a side of beef and a side of granite.”
From the edge of the camp, Alvin watched a dust devil whirl through the surveyors’ lines, knocking over a stack of cedar stakes. He didn’t move as the wind whipped his hair across his face.
“Changing, the air is,” Alvin murmured. “Warning us, the ancestors are. To touch what is hidden, a price there is. Taking the copper, they are, but the spirit of the stone, they cannot tame. Choking on the scent, the valley will be.”
High above, the Apache scouts watched the chaos below with a grim, silent satisfaction. They didn’t need to attack yet. The mountain was doing the work for them. They began to prepare for the evening’s ritual, the Sun Dance act nearing its dawn. The red dust was no longer just dirt; it was becoming a witness.
Captain Jack sat on the tongue of his lead wagon, his hands trembling as he tried to light a pipe. The match flared once, then died in the heavy, airless heat. He looked at the horizon and saw the shimmering heat waves distorting the world, making the mountains look like they were melting into the sky.
He didn’t try to speak. He just closed his eyes and felt the stuttering rhythm of the earth beneath his boots, a heartbeat that was growing faster, louder, and more demanding with every inch of copper pulled from the dark.
The Feed for the Swine
The alleyway behind Carl’s butcher shop smelled of iron, rot, and the wet, heavy musk of the hog pen. It was a dark vein in the camp’s anatomy where the “accidents” of Desolation Creek were quietly resolved. Two miners, their faces obscured by the filth of the pits, dragged a heavy canvas sack toward the gate. The sack was sodden, leaking a dark, viscous trail into the ruts.
“Watch the fucking step,” one hissed, his voice a gravelly rasp. “If the Marshal sees this, it’s our necks in the hemp, not Witherspoon’s.”
“The Marshal is face-down in a bottle of rotgut at the Gem,” the other spat. “And Witherspoon don’t give a damn about a dead Chinaman or a claim-jumper as long as the copper keeps moving. Open the gate.”
The gate creaked on rusted hinges. Inside, the pigs—massive, bristled beasts with eyes like dull marbles—began to grunt and shift in the muck. They knew the sound of the canvas. They knew the weight of the “delivery.”
Carl the Butcher stood on the back porch, leaning against a post, lighting a cigar that smelled like burning hair. He watched the miners dump the sack into the pen. The sound of the impact was dull, a wet thud that was immediately followed by the frantic, wet tearing of the swine.
“Make sure you get the boots back,” Carl called out, his voice flat. “Me boys can’t afford to waste good leather on a bunch of four-legged gluttons. And tell that cocksucker Witherspoon that if he wants me to handle any more of his ‘logistical inconveniences,’ the price of pork is going up.”
The miners didn’t answer. They scrambled back into the shadows of the street, leaving the carnage to the darkness.
Up on the hill, the lights of the San Pedro Mining Company shimmered like a taunt. Witherspoon stood at his window, watching the movement in the alley with a telescope of polished brass. He saw the miners leave. He saw Carl close his door. He saw the world as a series of transactions, some paid in coin, some in carrion.
“A necessary cycle,” Witherspoon whispered to himself. “The waste of the few feeds the industry of the many. Precisely so.”
Down at the Gem Saloon, the air was a thick soup of tobacco smoke, cheap perfume, and the desperate swearing of men losing their week’s wages. Trixie leaned against the bar, her eyes hard as flint, watching a newcomer try to cheat at faro.
“Fucking amateur,” she muttered, her hand drifting toward the small derringer tucked into her corset. “Try that again and I’ll have the Chinaman sweeping your teeth off the floorboards before the next hand is dealt.”
Captain Jack sat in a corner booth, his hat pulled low. He wasn’t drinking. He was listening to the sounds of the camp—the swearing, the fighting, the distant, rhythmic munching of the hogs. The stutter was clawing at his throat again, a physical weight. He began to whisper, the poem a shield against the filth around him:
The city’s heart is made of stone,
And built upon the bleaching bone,
The hunger grows within the gate,
Where greed and anger lie in wait,
To feed the cold and hungry fate.
“Captain!” Gester the Guesser slid into the booth opposite him, smelling of gin and cedar. “You look like a man who just saw his grandmother’s ghost in a whorehouse. You want a tip? Don’t look behind the butcher shop. Some things are better left uncounted. Ha! Give me a nickel and I’ll tell you which of these bastards is gonna be the next course for the pigs.”
“G-g-get out of here, Gester,” Jack grunted. “Before I s-s-step lively on your head.”
“Suit yourself, Captain. But the wind is shifting. The Apache aingt the only ones planning a dance. The pigs are getting fat, and Witherspoon is getting hungry.”
The first movement of the Rain Dance was complete. The clouds were finally gathering, black and heavy, but the water they promised wouldn’t wash away the sins of Desolation Creek. It would only turn the dirt into a deeper, stickier grave.
The Shadow of the Search
The night didn’t bring any coolness to Desolation Creek; it only brought the dark. The smell of the pig pens drifted upward, mixing with the scent of cheap gin and the metallic tang of the copper drifts. Inside the Gem, the kerosene lamps flickered, casting long, jittery shadows against the walls—shadows that looked a little too much like men with bows.
Trixie slammed a bottle down in front of a sweating miner. “Drink it and shut up about the ‘red ghosts’ on the ridge. You’re paid to dig, not to piss yourself every time a coyote howls.”
“It aingt just howling, Trixie,” the miner whispered, his hands shaking so hard he spilled half the glass. “They’re closer. I seen the reflection of a blade in the creek water when I went to wash. They’re just... waiting.”
High above the camp, Witherspoon sat in his study, the embers in his fireplace glowing like the eyes of a wolf. He was drafting a letter to the Territorial Governor, his handwriting a miracle of precise, heartless calligraphy.
...and thus, the necessity of a permanent military presence cannot be overstated. The ‘Apache problem’ is no longer a matter of frontier friction; it is a direct threat to the capital interests of the San Pedro Mining Company. If the savages must be removed to ensure the flow of ore, then let it be done with the swiftness that industry demands.
“Precisely so,” he muttered, sealing the envelope with a blob of red wax that looked like a fresh wound on the paper.
Outside, the silence was suddenly shattered by a sound that made every heart in the camp skip a beat—a high, curdling shriek that ripped through the heavy air.
“Fire! The livery is up!”
The scream didn’t come from a man. It was followed by the rapid, thundering hoofbeats of unshod horses. The Apache didn’t come with a roar; they came like a shifting of the dark itself.
Captain Jack sprinted out of his wagon, his boots hitting the mud just as a flaming arrow arched over the street, trailing a tail of orange sparks like a falling star. It thudded into the thatched roof of the laundry. Within seconds, the dry wood was screaming in the heat.
“B-b-belay the water buckets!” Jack roared, the stutter fighting him like a physical hand on his throat. “Step lively thar! To the s-s-square! Defend the women!”
He grabbed a heavy Spencer carbine from the wagon rack, his knuckles white. Across the street, he saw a shadow move with lethal grace. A young woman, the daughter of a teamster, was dragged from a porch, her scream cut short by a rough hand. Before Jack could level his sights, the riders were already turning back toward the black mouth of the canyon, the girl slumped across a pony’s mane like a sack of grain.
“They’re taking ‘em!” a voice wailed. “They’ve got Sarah!”
Carl the Butcher stepped out into the middle of the street, a double-barreled shotgun tucked into the crook of his arm. He didn’t look at the fire. He looked at the trail where the dust was still settling.
“Fucking savages,” Carl spat, wiping a smudge of soot from his cheek. “They don’t want the copper. They want to remind us that we’re breathing their air.”
Gester the Guesser crawled out from under a freight wagon, his eyes wide and yellow in the firelight. He held a charred piece of cedar in his hand, his “magic” charms scattered in the muck.
“You want a tip, Captain?” Gester rasped, his voice trembling. “Don’t go after ‘em. That girl is gone to the spirit world now, and anyone who follows her is just volunteering to be the next ghost. Ha! A nickel for the truth, but the truth is gonna cost you a hell of a lot more than that before the sun comes up.”
Alvin stood by the well, his face illuminated by the burning livery stable. He didn’t look at the fire, and he didn’t look at the fleeing riders. He looked at the mountain, where the first faint glimmer of the Sun Dance was beginning to stir in the pre-dawn light.
“Started, it has,” Alvin said, his Yoda-like cadence heavy with a strange, mournful weight. “Taken, the innocent are. Seeking the girl, the men will go. But find only their own shadows, they will, in the land where the sun never sets.”
The Rain Dance was over. The clouds had broken without a drop, leaving only the smoke of the burning town to choke the valley. The second act—the Sun Dance—was rising, and it would be written in the heat of a desperate pursuit.
The Gravity of the Herd
The world beyond the canyon mouth didn’t belong to the surveyors or the mining magnates; it belonged to the thunder. Not the thunder of the clouds, but the rhythmic, bone-deep vibration of ten million hooves moving in a singular, ancient purpose. To stand in the path of the Great Herd was to understand the insignificance of a brass transit or a copper claim. The bison moved like a tide of dark velvet, a quarter-continent of muscle and horn that made the very air taste of wild sage and hot musk.
In the center of this shifting mass, a man moved with a stillness that seemed to defy the chaos. He went by Noble—spelled No-bull by the illiterate clerks at the agency who thought it a clever joke, but spoken with a weight that suggested the older meaning. He didn’t ride a horse; he moved through the tall grass with the patient, rolling gait of a predator that had forgotten how to hurry.
Noble stopped, his eyes—pale as river ice—tracking the movement of a massive grizzly that was shadowing the herd’s edge. The bear was a mountain of silver-tipped fur, a relic of an era before the white man brought the “civilization” of the Sharps rifle.
“Watching the feast, the Great Father is,” a voice drifted from the tall grass.
Noble didn’t turn. He knew the cadence. Alvin appeared like a ghost rising from the sod, his clothes covered in the red dust of the camp, a stark contrast to the golden sea of the prairie.
“To the buffalo, the land belongs,” Alvin murmured, his Yoda-like rhythm syncing with the distant thrum of the hooves. “Taking only what they need, the People are. But coming, the cold iron is. To break the spirit, they will kill the flesh.”
Noble looked at Alvin, his face a landscape of scars and weather. “The iron is already here, Alvin. It’s in the hills. It’s in that cocksucker Witherspoon’s eyes. He don’t want the meat. He wants the silence that comes after the herd is gone.”
Down in the valley, the pursuit party from Desolation Creek was a pathetic sight—a thin line of dust kicked up by exhausted horses. Captain Jack led the way, his face a mask of soot and sweat. Behind him rode Carl the Butcher, two heavy revolvers tucked into a belt that looked like it was made of dried sinew.
“Step lively thar!” Jack roared, though his s-s-stutter was catching on every third word as the heat of the Sun Dance began to bake the marrow in his bones. “The trail is g-g-getting cold, and the sun aingt gonna wait for us to find me b-b-bearings!”
Carl spat a glob of black tobacco into the grass. “Fuck your bearings, Jack. We follow the blood. That girl’s dress was torn on the brush back there. If we don’t catch ‘em before they hit the breaks of the Gila, she’s as good as a ghost.”
The “passersby” of this hunt were the vultures, circling in slow, lazy registers, waiting for the heat to do what the arrows hadn’t yet. The complexity of the Indian Affairs was playing out in real-time; the Army had been “delayed” by a bureaucratic dispute over grain rations in D.C., leaving the rescue to a stuttering sea captain, a butcher with a taste for blood, and a camp of miners who couldn’t tell a war party from a willow tree.
Back in the cool, shaded sanctuary of his office, Witherspoon sat before a plate of chilled oysters, the ice having been hauled in sawdust-packed crates from the high mountains. He cracked a shell with a silver pick, the sound echoing in the quiet room.
“The abduction is a tactical boon,” Witherspoon said to the empty air, his voice a polished stone. “It provides the moral leverage required to authorize the scorched-earth policy. If the settlers demand blood, I shall provide the ink for the warrants. Precisely so.”
He glanced at a sketch on his desk—a rendering of the “No-bull” character. The agency had labeled him a “dangerous agitator,” a man who lived between two worlds and belonged to neither. To Witherspoon, Noble was simply an obstacle to be mapped and moved.
Out on the plains, the grizzly bear let out a roar that shook the goldenrod. It had brought down a calf, and the scent of fresh blood began to drift toward the rescue party.
“Smell that?” Carl asked, checking the hammers on his shotgun. “That aingt buffalo. That’s the smell of a kill. And I got a feeling we aingt the ones doing the hunting today.”
Noble watched them from the ridge, a silhouette against the rising heat. He knew what the white men didn’t: that the Sun Dance wasn’t just a prayer for strength. It was a preparation for the end of the world they knew. The buffalo were the heart, and the heart was being cut out, one shot at a time.
“Coming, the shadow is,” Alvin whispered, his eyes fixed on the horizon where the Great Herd met the sky. “To save the girl, a man must lose his soul. Finding it again, the hard part will be.”
The chase was no longer just about a kidnapped girl; it was a collision of two worlds—one built on the logic of the surveyor’s chain, and the other on the gravity of the herd. And as the sun reached its zenith, the red dust of Desolation Creek began to settle on the golden grass, a stain that wouldn’t wash away.
The air in the telegraph office smelled of ozone and stale cigars, a sharp, electric contrast to the dust and dung of the street. Gester the Guesser sat with his feet up on the mahogany desk, his fingers dancing a nervous jig over the brass key. He wasn’t just tapping out code; he was listening to the heartbeat of a continent being wired for execution.
“Hear that, Carl?” Gester chirped, not looking up as the butcher leaned in the doorway. “That’s the sound of the Southern Pacific. It’s a rhythmic little stutter, aingt it? Like a heart murmur. A spur is coming off the main line, heading straight for this godforsaken hole. You want a tip? Buy wood. Buy all the fucking timber you can find. Because when that iron horse arrives, it’s gonna need a lot of coffins for the people who think they can stand in its way. Ha! A nickel for the news, or a buck if you want me to tell you which of Witherspoon’s buddies already bought up the land near the tracks.”
The rumor of the railroad was a low-frequency hum that turned the camp’s greed into a frenzy. It meant the end of the wagon trains and the beginning of the end for the Apache. It meant the copper wouldn’t just be hauled; it would be devoured.
Down in the “Chinatown” district—a cluster of shacks held together by spit and desperation—the atmosphere was different. Here, the air was a thick, sweet fog of opium and lye. Long Duk Dong moved through the laundry with a silence that made the miners nervous. He wasn’t just a businessman; he was a gatekeeper. He ran the restaurant, the wash, the girls, and the pipes, holding the camp’s vices in a delicate, silken grip.
“Too much noise,” Long Duk Dong murmured, watching a group of drunken laborers stumble past the opium den. “The iron road brings many people. Many people bring many ghosts. And ghosts are very hungry.”
He watched as a young girl, barely out of her teens, was led into the back room of the den. Her eyes were already glassy, her spirit halfway to the moon. In this part of town, “feeding the pigs” wasn’t just a way to hide a body; it was a way of life. The dead didn’t stay dead for long; they became part of the profit margin.
The Iron Stitch
Witherspoon stood at the edge of the camp, watching the first of the railroad surveyors drive a silver spike into the red earth. To him, the coming track was a suture, a way to sew the wilderness shut and bleed it dry.
“The connectivity is paramount,” Witherspoon said to the surveyor, his voice crisp and devoid of warmth. “The Southern Pacific is the needle, and this valley is the cloth. We shall stitch it so tightly that not even a spirit can slip through the seams. Precisely so.”
He adjusted his spectacles, the glass reflecting the glint of the rails that didn’t exist yet. He didn’t care about the kidnapped girl or the Sun Dance. He cared about the tonnage.
Captain Jack watched the surveyors from his wagon, his hand resting on the hilt of his cutlass. The stutter was a drumbeat in his chest. “T-t-t-tracks,” he whispered. “A g-g-gallows for the g-g-grass. Step lively thar! The land is b-b-being sold by the yard, and we’re just the b-b-ballast for the rails.”
He began his whisper, the words a jagged edge against the encroaching iron:
The iron snake begins to crawl,
Beneath the shadow of the wall,
It eats the distance and the light,
To turn the morning into night,
And leave the world a hollow hall.
“Changing, the map is,” Alvin said, appearing beside him. “Dying, the buffalo are, and coming, the steel is. To bind the earth, they try. But the earth, it does not like to be bound. Screaming, the rails will be, when the mountain wakes.”
Noble watched from the ridge, a silhouette of old-world defiance. He saw the silver spike. He saw the telegraph wires stretching like a spiderweb across the sky. He knew that the railroad wasn’t just a machine; it was a weapon. It would bring the soldiers, the Gatling guns, and the end of the Great Herd.
“No-bull,” he muttered to himself, the name the white men gave him a bitter taste on his tongue. “They think they can cage the wind with a wire. They think the Sun Dance is just a show. They’re gonna find out that when you stitch the earth too tight, the earth just rips.”
The complex politics of the Indian Affairs were now a matter of logistics. The railroad would provide the transport for the “final solution” to the Apache problem. The Sun Dance was reaching its fever pitch, the dancers’ feet treading a rhythm that the telegraph keys couldn’t hope to match.
The stage was set for the tragic conclusion. The wagon trains were a dying breed, the copper miners were a desperate one, and the railroad was the cold, unyielding future. And in the middle of it all, the girl was still missing, a single soul lost in a world that was being recalculated by the mile.
The Apothecary’s Ledger
The air in Witherspoon’s outer office was thick with the scent of lavender water, a pathetic attempt to mask the underlying smell of Miller’s decay. Miller sat at his desk, his hands performing a frantic, involuntary dance over the ledger pages. To a casual observer, he looked like a man possessed by the spirit of accounting; to anyone who had spent a night in the “Chinatown” district, he looked like a man whose blood was being replaced by vinegar and poppy tears.
His pupils were mere pinpricks, tiny black holes swallowing the light of the kerosene lamp. He reached into his vest pocket, his fingers fumbling with a small glass vial of laudanum—the “red help” that kept the screaming in his nerves down to a dull roar.
“The... the quarterly projections, sir,” Miller stammered, his voice jumping an octave as Witherspoon entered the room. “I’ve adjusted for the... the loss of the Chinese laborers. I’ve factored in the cost of the swine feed and the... the silver spikes.”
Witherspoon looked down at Miller with the same detached curiosity he might afford a specimen in a jar. He saw the sweat beading on Miller’s upper lip, the way the man’s skin looked like parchment stretched too tight over a skull.
“You are shaking, Miller,” Witherspoon said, his voice a cool, rhythmic chime. “It is a lack of discipline. Or perhaps a surfeit of ‘medicine.’ I require the reports to be legible, not a map of your internal tremors. Precisely so.”
“Yes, sir. Disciplined, sir. I’ll just... I’ll have a drop of water,” Miller rasped, already looking toward the door, his mind already three blocks away in the blue smoke of Long Duk Dong’s back room.
The Threshold of the Poppy
Long Duk Dong watched Miller stumble into the den, the twitching man looking like a puppet with tangled strings. He didn’t need to ask what the clerk wanted. He signaled to one of the girls, who prepared a pipe with the practiced, somber movements of a priestess.
“The ink is on your fingers, Miller-san,” Long Duk Dong said softly. “But the hunger is in your eyes. You serve a cold master, yet you seek a warm sleep. A dangerous trade.”
“Just give it to me, you yellow cocksucker,” Miller hissed, his civility dissolved by the withdrawal clawing at his gut. “I got the coin. I got Witherspoon’s secrets. Just make the world stop spinning.”
He took the pipe, the sweet, heavy smoke filling his lungs and turning his bones into liquid lead. For a moment, the railroad didn’t exist. The Apache didn’t exist. Even Witherspoon was just a fading shadow in a golden fog.
Outside, the “passersby” of the street—the muddy, the weary, and the wicked—continued their slow crawl toward the tragic conclusion.
Captain Jack passed the den, his boots heavy in the muck. He caught a whiff of the opium and felt a shudder of revulsion. He looked at the telegraph wires overhead, humming with the messages Miller had likely typed out while half-blind with heroin.
“B-b-building a world on a f-f-foundation of rot,” Jack whispered. “Step lively thar! The d-d-dreams are turning into nightmares, and the nightmares are g-g-getting hungry.”
He began his whisper, the words a low-tide growl against the stench of the den:
The poppy blooms in fields of red,
To soothe the heart and numb the head,
But beneath the silk and silver smoke,
The spirit wears a heavy yoke,
And wakes to find the morning dead.
Alvin stood at the corner, watching the smoke curl out of the den’s vents.
“Chasing the sun, the twitchy man is,” Alvin murmured. “But finding only the moon, he will. To escape the master, he runs to the ghost. But the ghost, a harder master it is.”
Noble watched from the ridge, his eyes catching the faint, sickly sweet scent on the wind. He knew that a town that fed its men poison and its dead to the pigs was a town that was already eating itself. The Sun Dance was reaching its peak, a ritual of endurance and clarity, while below, in the red dust of the camp, the white men were drowning in their own filth.
The tragedy wasn’t just coming from the mountains; it was being brewed in the very bowls of the pipes and the ledgers of the twitching men.
The White Plague and the Red Drop
The air in the office was too thin for Miller. Every breath was a negotiation with a chest that felt like it was packed with wet wool and broken glass. He leaned over the company books, a handkerchief pressed to his mouth—a scrap of linen already decorated with the bright, tell-tale blossoms of arterial blood.
He wasn’t just shaking from the drugs; he was shaking from the hollow, rattling chill that lived in his marrow. Tuberculosis was a slow fire, and the heroin was the only thing that turned the flames into a cool, blue mist.
“Another... another shipment of timber for the trestles,” Miller wheezed, his voice thin as a reed. He reached for the bottle of laudanum, his fingers stained with ink and the rust of his own lungs. He didn’t even use a spoon anymore. He just tilted the vial back until the bitter, syrupy heat hit the back of his throat.
Witherspoon stood by the window, his back to the room. He didn’t look at the bloody handkerchief. He didn’t acknowledge the wet, hacking cough that broke the silence. To Witherspoon, Miller was a failing piece of machinery—useful until the gears finally seized, and not a moment longer.
“The mortality rate in the northern drift is rising, Miller,” Witherspoon said, his voice a smooth, terrifying calm. “But your mortality is the only one that concerns the immediate filing. See to it that you don’t expire before the Southern Pacific audit. It would be... inconvenient. Precisely so.”
Miller didn’t answer. He couldn’t. He was waiting for the red drop to find his bloodstream, waiting for the moment when the pain of being alive finally went quiet.
The Hollow Man
Long Duk Dong watched Miller from the shadows of the restaurant’s kitchen, where the steam from the dumplings rose like a shroud. He saw the way the clerk’s coat hung off his sharpening shoulders.
“The ghost is eating the man,” Long Duk Dong said to Trixie as she came in to settle the Gem’s laundry bill. “He seeks the poppy to hide from the rot, but the poppy only makes the rot more comfortable.”
Trixie looked through the doorway at Miller, who was stumbling toward the telegraph office. “Poor bastard. In this town, you either die by the gun, the mountain, or the lung. At least the heroin gives him a nice view on the way out. But if he drops dead with Witherspoon’s keys in his pocket, there’s gonna be a hell of a scramble for the contents of that safe.”
Captain Jack met Miller on the boardwalk, the clerk nearly collapsing into the Captaings sturdy frame. Jack caught him by the elbows, the smell of sickness and opium hitting him like a physical blow.
“B-b-easy thar, lad,” Jack grunted, his voice softening. “You’re p-p-pale as a shroud. Step lively, or you’ll be b-b-ballast before the tide turns.”
Miller looked up, his eyes glassy and unfocused. “The... the rails are coming, Captain. Can you hear ‘em? They sound like... like teeth. Chewing on the hills.”
He broke into a fit of coughing that doubled him over. Jack held him until the spasm passed, then watched as the twitchy man vanished into the fog of the street. Jack began his whisper, the words a dirge for the walking dead:
The breath is caught in silver mesh,
To tear the spirit from the flesh,
The fire burns within the bone,
To leave the weary man alone,
And turn the living heart to stone.
Alvin stood by the livery, watching the red dust settle on a discarded bandage Miller had dropped.
“Dying from the inside, the white man is,” Alvin murmured. “Taking the copper to pay for the poison. To heal the body, he kills the mind. But the mountain, it does not have the consumption. It only has the patience.”
Noble watched from the ridge, seeing the way the camp’s sickness mirrored the sickness of the land. The miners tore at the earth’s lungs, and in return, the earth gave them the rot. The Sun Dance was a celebration of life’s endurance, a sharp contrast to the slow, drugged slide into the grave that was claiming the men of Desolation Creek.
The tragedy was no longer just a possibility; it was a contagion. And Miller, with his bloody handkerchief and his silver pen, was the one writing the final bill.
The Ledger of the Lost
The heat in the telegraph office was an oppressive weight, thick with the smell of Miller’s sickness and the electric tang of the wires. Gester the Guesser sat hunched over the desk, his eyes darting toward the door every time a board creaked. He wasn’t just a teller of secrets; he was a gatekeeper for a future that was arriving one click at a time.
“Hear that, Miller?” Gester whispered, his fingers hovering over the brass key. “That’s the sound of the Southern Pacific audit. They’re asking about the ‘discrepancies’ in the timber shipments. Seems Witherspoon’s been charging the railroad for cedar and giving ‘em rotted pine. You want a tip? Don’t be the one holding the pen when the auditor walks through that door. Ha! A nickel for the warning, or a dollar if you want me to help you find a hole to hide in.”
Miller didn’t answer. He was slumped in a chair, his face the color of wet ash. He pressed a hand to his chest, feeling the ragged, wet rattle of his lungs. The laudanum was wearing off, and the world was beginning to sharpen into a jagged, painful reality.
“The... the files are in order,” Miller wheezed, his voice a ghost of a sound. “Witherspoon... he knows what he’s doing. He doesn’t leave trails. Only... only bodies.”
He coughed, a violent, hacking sound that sprayed a fine mist of red onto the yellowed vellum of the report. He stared at the blood for a long moment, then slowly, methodically, wiped it away with his sleeve.
“Step lively, Miller,” Gester mocked, though his voice lacked its usual bite. “Or you’ll be the next ‘discrepancy’ Carl has to feed to the swine.”
The Geometry of the Sun Dance
While the white men in the valley drowned in their tea and their ledgers, the ridges of the Dragoons were undergoing a transformation. The transition from the Rain Dance to the Sun Dance wasn’t a sudden break; it was an evolution of the spirit. The prayers for water had shifted into a preparation for endurance.
In a hidden glade, far above the reach of the surveyors’ chains, the Sun Dance pole was being raised. It wasn’t just wood; it was the center of the world, a bridge between the parched earth and the unblinking eye of the sun.
Noble stood at the edge of the clearing, watching the young men prepare. They weren’t just dancers; they were warriors learning the geometry of pain. He saw the eagle bone whistles, the buffalo skulls, and the heavy thongs that would bind their flesh to the pole.
“Understanding the price, they are,” Alvin said, appearing beside Noble. “To save the land, the flesh must pay. To find the power, the ego must die. Coming, the Great Heat is, and only the strong will remain.”
“The white men call it a massacre in the making,” Noble rasped, his eyes fixed on the dancers. “They don’t see the prayer. They only see the scars. They think the Sun Dance is an act of war, but it’s an act of memory.”
“Forgetting their own spirits, they have,” Alvin murmured. “In the red dust and the copper smoke, lost they are. But the Sun Dance... it remembers everything. It remembers the buffalo before the guns. It remembers the water before the poison.”
Down in the camp, the “passersby” were oblivious. A group of miners was brawling outside the Gem, their swearing a sharp, ugly counterpoint to the distant, rhythmic drumming on the ridge. Trixie stood on the porch, watching the fight with a bored expression, her hand resting on the hilt of her knife.
“Fight all you want, you cocksuckers,” she muttered. “The only winner in this town is the dirt. It gets us all eventually.”
Captain Jack sat by his wagon, cleaning his Spencer carbine with a piece of oiled rag. He looked up at the sun, which felt like a physical hand pressing down on his head. The stutter was quiet for now, replaced by a cold, heavy dread. He began his whisper, the words a low, rhythmic chant:
The sun it burns a hole in time,
To mock the man and punish crime,
The shadow shrinks beneath the heel,
While hearts are turned to cold and steel,
And all the world is made to feel.
He snapped the breech of the rifle shut. “Step lively thar. The dance is changing, and the music is gonna get a hell of a lot louder before it stops.”
Witherspoon sat in his cool, shaded office, looking at a map of the proposed railroad spur. He saw the sacred glade marked as “unproductive scrub.” He dipped his pen in the ink and drew a straight, black line through the heart of it.
“The Sun Dance,” Witherspoon murmured, a faint, rhythmic tapping of his fingers on the desk. “A quaint cultural eccentricity. It shall make a fine footnote in the company’s history of the territory. Precisely so.”
The First Act was nearing its zenith. The rain had failed, the dust had settled, and now the heat was coming—a white, blinding heat that would burn away the lies of Desolation Creek and leave only the truth of the Sun Dance behind.
Chapter 3
The desert floor didn’t just hold the heat; it breathed it back, a thick, shimmering lung of dust and sage.
“Moving slow, we are, like the sun across the salt,” Alvin said, squinting toward the horizon where the mountains looked like jagged teeth. “Thirsty, the horses are. Rest, they must, before the moon rises up.”
Captain Jack spat a glob of tobacco into the dirt, his eyes never leaving the shimmering line of the horizon. “Belay that talk of resting, ye scurvy dog! If we aingt reaching the canyon by nightfall, the spirits’ll be dancing on our graves, yarr. Step lively thar, or we’ll be finding ourselves in Davy Jones’ locker before the first drum beats.”
Gester the Guesser wiped a layer of grime from his brow and let out a sharp, barking laugh. “Look at this one! A pirate in the middle of a sandbox. What, you’re looking for a whale? Maybe a nice lox to go with all this salt? I’m telling ya, Jack, if you find a drop of water out here, I’ll marry me own grandmother. And believe me, she aingt no prize.”
Carl the Carl Butcher Battleheim was busy sharpning a rusted blade, the metallic rasp cutting through the dry air. “Me thinks the spirits is already watching. Me sees ‘em in the wavering air, dancing and spinning like dry leaves. Me aingt liking the look of it, not one bit. Me skings crawling like it’s covered in ants.”
Witherspoon adjusted his spectacles, looking down his nose at the butcher despite the dust coating his fine linen. “The atmospheric conditions are certainly conducive to optical illusions, Carl. However, I must insist that we maintain a modicum of decorum. We are approaching a historical convergence, a moment where the veil between worlds is purportedly at its thinnest. It is hardly the time for your superstitious drivel.”
“Drivel, he calls it!” Gester chirped, pointing a bony finger at Witherspoon. “Listen to the Professor! He’s got words so big they need their own zip code. Tell me, Mr. Dictionary, does your ‘decorum’ come with a canteen? Because I’m so parched me tongue feels like a piece of old carpet.”
The sun began its slow, heavy descent, turning the sky a bruised purple that seemed to press down on ‘em.
“Gripping the light, the sky is,” Alvin whispered, pulling on the reins. “Waiting for the dance, it is.”
“Steady as she goes,” Captain Jack muttered, his voice dropping to a raspy low. “I’ve seen storms on the Atlantic that’d turn a man’s blood to ice, but this... this is a different kind of gale brewing. Thar’s ghosts in the wind, boys. I kin smell ‘em.”
He closed his eyes and began to murmur, the words barely audible over the crunch of sand:
The sea is deep and dark and wide,
The moon is pulling at the tide,
The spirits rise from out the foam,
To find a way to wander home,
The anchors drop into the loam.
As the last word left his lips, the stutter that had been creeping into his commands vanished. He stood tall in his stirrups. “Right then. We press on. The canyon is just past that ridge, and I’ll be blowed if I’m missing the opening act.”
The ridge loomed ahead, a jagged spine of black rock cutting the bruised purple sky in two.
“Going up this hill, a bad idea it is,” Alvin muttered, his hands trembling slightly on the reins. “Watching us, the mountain is. Feel it in me bones, I do.”
Gester the Guesser let out a loud, miserable groan from atop his mule. “Oh, listen to him! The philosopher of the sagebrush! Your bones are aching? My whole life is aching! Look at this hill. It’s not a ridge, it’s an insult. Who puts a mountain right where people are trying to walk? I’ll tell you who—someone who hates feet.”
“Keep yer trap shut, ye miserable landlubber,” Captain Jack growled, though his own eyes were scanning the rocks above with deep suspicion. “The wind’s dying down, and that aingt a good sign. It’s the calm before the tempest, yarr. Step lively thar, the whole lot of ye, or we’ll be marooned on this rock without a drop of rum to see us through the night.”
“Me aingt liking the silence,” Carl the Carl Butcher Battleheim muttered, his fingers tightly gripping the handle of his cleaver. “Me feels like something’s breathing down me neck. Me looks around, and there’s nothing but shadows, but me knows they’re moving. Me axes is ready, but how do ye chop a ghost, eh? Me wants to know.”
Witherspoon sighed, a sound of pure exhaustion mixed with aristocratic disdain. “Carl, your grasp of metaphysical properties is as limited as your grammar. One does not ‘chop’ an apparition. If the accounts of the Ghost Dance protocol are accurate, we are about to witness a localized temporal distortion. It requires scientific observation, not butchery.”
“Listen to him!” Gester cackled, pointing at Witherspoon. “Scientific observation! He wants to take notes while the dead people start dancing! Maybe you should ask them for their recipes while you’re at it, Professor. I’m sure they make a lovely sponge cake in the afterlife.”
As they reached the crest of the ridge, the canyon opened up below them, a massive, deep bowl filled with a strange, swirling mist that didn’t seem to belong in the desert heat. The air was thick, heavy, holding the last remnants of the day like a fist.
Down in the basin, the first faint sound of a drum began to echo—a low, rhythmic thumping that vibrated right through the soles of their boots.
Captain Jack froze. A faint tremor caught his jaw. “Th-th-they’re...” He stopped, his chest heaving as he fought the stutter rising in his throat. He shook his head fiercely, closed his eyes, and began to whisper under his breath:
The timber creaks against the gale,
The tattered cloth begins to fail,
The phantom crew is at the oar,
To row the dead men back to shore,
And walk upon the earth once more.
He opened his eyes, the stutter completely vanished, his gaze fixed on the mist below. “Clear the decks,” he whispered. “The dance has begun.”
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The low thumping of the drum rolled up the canyon walls, a heavy heartbeat that seemed to pulse from the stone itself. The swirling mist in the basin began to glow with a pale, phosphorescent light, twisting into shapes that looked altogether too much like human forms.
“Coming out of the ground, they are,” Alvin whispered, his eyes wide as saucers as he pulled his horse to a sharp halt. “Dancing in the fog, the old ones are. Go down there, me thinks we should not.”
“Oh, look at the brave pioneer!” Gester the Guesser shouted, his voice cracking with a mix of terror and theatrical misery. “He sees ghosts and suddenly he’s a genius! I could have told you ten miles ago that going into a glowing fog was a terrible idea. My uncle Morris once walked into a thick fog in Minsk and came out married to a woman with a wooden leg. You think ghosts are bad? Try Thanksgiving with Aunt Ida!”
“Belay that jawing!” Captain Jack hissed, his hand resting firmly on the hilt of his cutlass as he peered down into the glowing abyss. “Look at the way the vapor moves, yarr. That aingt no ordinary fog. That’s the breath of the deep, a phantom tide rolling in over the sand. Step lively thar, boys, we keep the high ground or we risk geting swallowed whole by the current.”
“Me sees ‘em clearly now,” Carl the Carl Butcher Battleheim growled, his knuckles turning white around his cleaver. “Me sees me old uncle Albert down there, the one what got trampled by the dray horse in Whitechapel. Me aingt imagining it! He’s waving his spectral hand at me! Me skin is turning to gooseflesh, it is. Me wants to go home to me shop.”
Witherspoon adjusted his spectacles, his fingers trembling slightly despite his best efforts to maintain a cold, academic demeanor. “ Fascinating... truly unprecedented. The luminous phenomena down there suggest a high concentration of ionized atmospheric particles, or perhaps... well, perhaps something entirely beyond our current understanding of thermodynamics. Carl, control your hysterics. Your uncle Albert is most assuredly not down there; this is merely a collective hallucinatory response to the geographic altitude and the auditory frequency of the percussion.”
“Auditory frequency!” Gester mimicked, throwing his hands in the air. “The Professor thinks it’s a concert! Maybe we should buy tickets, Witherspoon? Maybe they have a concession stand down there selling ghost popcorn? I’m telling ya, the air is thick enough to chew, and it smells like old laundry!”
The drumming grew louder, faster, the rhythm changing from a slow march to a frantic, driving beat that made the horses whinny and kick at the dirt. The figures in the mist began to spin, their movements frantic and chaotic, a wild reel of the forgotten dead.
The sky above ‘em seemed to tighten, holding the darkness like a vice, suffocating the stars.
Captain Jack took a sharp breath, his jaw locking up as he tried to order a retreat. “W-w-we need to... b-b-back the...” He stopped, cursing silently as the stutter gripped his throat. He clamped his eyes shut, tilted his head toward the dark sky, and began his hurried, rhythmic whisper:
The mainmast snaps beneath the strain,
The black sky pours a bitter rain,
The charts are torn, the compass blind,
With only shadows left behind,
No harbor shall the lost crew find.
The tension left his face, and his eyes snapped open, clear and sharp as flint. “Turn the mounts!” he roared, his voice cutting through the thrumming of the canyon drums. “The tide is rising and the shore is crumbling beneath our feet! We fall back to the timber line before the fog climbs the ridge!”
The horses scrambled against the scree, their hooves kicking up sparks of flint as they fought for purchase on the narrow trail. Below ‘em, the glowing mist began to rise like a slow-boiling pot, licking at the lower slopes of the ridge with pale, spectral fingers.
“Chasing us, the shadows are!” Alvin cried, leaning low over his horse’s neck. “Faster, we must go! Catching our heels, the dead are!”
“I’m riding as fast as I can!” Gester the Guesser shrieked, flailing his arms like a panicked windmill. “You think this mule has a turbo-engine? It’s a mule, Alvin! It’s built for stubbornness and looking depressed, not outrunning the light-show from the great beyond! If me heart beats any harder, it’s gonna jump out of me chest and start dancing down there with ‘em!”
Carl the Carl Butcher Battleheim was swinging his cleaver at the empty air behind him, his breath coming in ragged, wet gasps. “Me feels ‘em! Me feels the cold breath on me neck! Me aingt staying to be no ghost’s dinner! Me has a shop to get back to, me has sausages to link! Me runs like the wind, me does!”
Witherspoon’s hat had blown off in the scramble, leaving his thin hair to flutter wildly in the unnatural draft. “The velocity of the vapor’s ascent is... is physically impossible!” he gasped, looking back over his shoulder with a face as white as parchment. “It defies every known law of gaseous expansion! It’s as if the atmosphere itself has developed a predatory intent!”
“Scientific intent, me foot!” Captain Jack hollered, his eyes fixed on the treeline just a few hundred yards ahead. “It’s a graveyard gale, Professor! A soul-stealing squall! Step lively thar, ye scurvy dogs! Into the timber! The spirits can’t follow where the living wood stands guard, yarr!”
They breached the edge of the forest just as the first wisps of the glowing fog reached the crest of the ridge. They plunged into the deep, pine-scented darkness, the heavy boughs of the ancient trees closing over ‘em like a wooden shield.
Suddenly, the thumping of the drums muffled, sounding like it was miles away instead of just over the hill. The frantic energy in the air snapped, leaving nothing but the quiet creak of saddles and the heavy heaving of the horses’ lungs.
Captain Jack pulled his mount to a halt, his hand trembling as he wiped the salt spray of sweat from his forehead. He looked back toward the ridge, where the pale light of the canyon reflected off the underside of the clouds, turning the horizon into a jagged, glowing wound.
“St-st-steady...” he began, the stutter catching his tongue like a hook. He bowed his head, the darkness of the pines swallowing his silhouette as he whispered into the mane of his horse:
The anchors hold in solid ground,
The lost and weary now are found,
The forest stands both deep and old,
Against the night and biting cold,
Within the safety of the fold.
He exhaled a long, shaky breath and straightened his back, looking at his ragged crew. “We drop anchor here for the night,” he said, his voice firm and clear. “Post a double watch. I want no one sleeping with their back to the ridge. We’ve crossed the first threshold of the protocol, but the dance aingt over yet. Not by a long shot.”
Alvin looked into the dark woods, then back at the glowing sky. “Safe, we are? Or trapped, we have become?”
Gester the Guesser let out a long, pathetic sigh. “Safe? Trapped? Who cares? As long as nobody asks me to dance, I’m staying right here until the sun comes back or I turn into a statue. And believe me, a statue would have a better time on this trip than I’m having.”
Chapter 4
The forest didn’t just hold the dark; it clutched it. The pines stood like silent sentinels, their needles knitting together a canopy so thick that not even a stray glimmer of the Ghost Dance could pierce through. The air here was different—heavy with the scent of damp earth and ancient resin, a sharp contrast to the sulfurous tang of the canyon.
“Gone, the light is,” Alvin whispered, his voice barely a ripple in the stillness. “Under the trees, safe we are? Or in the belly of the beast, have we walked?”
Gester the Guesser slid off his mule with the grace of a sack of wet flour, groaning as his boots hit the pine needles. “Safe? You call this safe? It’s dark, it’s damp, and I’m pretty sure a squirrel just gave me a look like I’m on the menu. I’m telling ya, Alvin, I’ve had better nights sleeping on a pile of wet rocks in Pinsk. At least the rocks didn’t try to be ‘mysterious’ at me.”
Captain Jack remained atop his horse, his eyes darting between the thick trunks. “Belay the whining, Gester! We’re in the lee of the storm now, yarr. The spirits of the salt don’t care much for the scent of living sap. It’s a natural bulkhead, keeping the phantom tide at bay.” He adjusted his tri-cornered hat, his hand brushing against the hilt of his sword. “But don’t ye be thinking we’re out of the doldrums yet. This wood has a memory longer than a ship’s log, and we’re uninvited guests in its parlor.”
Carl the Carl Butcher Battleheim was already busy, his heavy boots crunching as he cleared a small patch of ground. “Me feels the weight of ‘em,” he muttered, his dialect thick as mutton gravy. “The trees is watching me. Me sees faces in the bark, twisted and old. Me aingt liking how they stands so still. Me’s gonna start a fire, me is. Me needs the light to keep me shadows from walking off on their own.”
Witherspoon leaned against a cedar, wringing his silken handkerchief as if he could squeeze the terror out of it. “A fire would be most welcome, Carl, though I suspect its efficacy against ‘sentient shadows’ is scientifically dubious. The dendrological density here is quite remarkable. It seems to act as a natural dampening field for the acoustic vibrations we encountered in the basin. A fascinating specimen of geological and biological synergy, wouldn’t you say?”
“A specimen!” Gester cackled, fumbling with his pack. “He’s lost his hat, his dignity, and half his mind, and he’s talking about synergy! Listen to the Professor! If a bear comes out of these woods to eat us, Witherspoon will probably try to measure its teeth before it bites his head off. ‘Oh look,’ he’ll say, ‘what a fascinating example of ursine dentition!’”
The horses huffed, their breath forming little ghosts of steam in the chilling air. The silence of the woods was deep—not the empty silence of the desert, but a crowded, waiting silence that made the hair on the back of the neck prickle.
“Waiting for us, the center of the wood is,” Alvin said, looking deeper into the shadows where the trail seemed to vanish. “To the heart, we must go. Find the singer, we will.”
Captain Jack felt the familiar hitch in his chest, the words catching like a snagged line. “W-w-we... n-n-not...” He squeezed his eyes shut, his knuckles turning white on the reins as he began the whispered ward:
The forest floor is deep and black,
There is no turning on the track,
The roots are twisted like a rope,
To catch the man who loses hope,
Beyond the reach of sun and scope.
The tremor left his hands, and his voice returned, cold and steady as an iron anchor. “The lad’s right. We don’t drop anchor here. We move deeper. The Ghost Dance was just the siren’s song. The real prize is further in, where the wood turns to iron and the wind learns to speak.”
The transition back was always a violent downshift. One moment Alvings mind was swimming through the elegant, multi-dimensional geometry of the grid—where thought was instantaneous, pure, and boundless—and the next, he was violently shoved back into the meat suit.
His eyes snapped open. The sensory assault of 1865 hit him like a physical blow.
The air tasted like sulfur, cheap tobacco, and the wet rot of pine boards. The ambient noise of the mining camp filtered through the gaps in the shack’s log walls—the rhythmic, distant thud of a stamp mill crushing ore, the braying of a pack mule, the thick, muddy slosh of boots in the street outside.
He was sitting on a three-legged stool, slumped over a rough-hewn pine table.
Alvin looked down at his hands. They felt thick. Clumsy. Stubby biological instruments covered in coal dust and dried sweat. He flexed his fingers, watching the tendons shift under skin that felt entirely too tight. On Earth, he had to speak through a throat made of gristle and muscle, forcing his thoughts into the clunky, linear tracks of human speech.
A heavy boot kicked the bottom of the wooden door, rattling the leather hinges.
“Yo, Alvin! You dead in there, or you just simple?”
It was Billy. Billy, whose vocabulary hovered around a few hundred words, mostly consisting of frontier slang, gambling jargon, and creative profanity. To Alvings newly returned mind, Billy’s voice sounded like a rusted shovel scraping over gravel. Backward syntax. Neanderthal phrasing.
But Billy was his bridge to this dirt-world. And right now, Billy sounded panicked.
Alvin swallowed hard, trying to lubricate a throat that felt full of sawdust, forcing his vocal cords to mimic the native tongue. “I am... present, Billy. One moment.”
He stood up, his balance momentarily wavering as gravity reasserted its heavy, annoying claim on his bones. He slid back the iron bolt and pulled the door open.
Billy was pacing the muddy boardwalk outside, a hand resting nervously near the pistol tucked into his canvas trousers. He looked Alvin up and down, his eyes wide under the brim of a filthy slouch hat.
“Man, you look like ghost shit,” Billy said, spitting a dark stream of tobacco juice past Alvings boots before stepping into the shack. “We got a situation down at the freight office. The company men, the ones running the books for the syndicate? They’re saying someone—or something—fried the whole damn telegraph line between here and Carson City. Burned the paper tape right out of the receiver. Left ‘em with nothing but dead copper and smoke. And the operator swears the clicking he heard right before it went dark sounded just like that weird-ass rhythm you were tapping out on the table last week.”
Billy stopped, pointing a dirt-caked finger at Alvings face. “They’re looking for a freak, Alvin. And around this camp, you’re the freakiest tech-head we got. If the marshal figures out you’ve been bleeding that line into whatever it is you do in here...”
Take two! Let’s see that 20% human polish on this 1865 frontier grit.
Alvin didn’t blink. Couldn’t, really. Not yet. His biological eyelids felt heavy, like wet leather.
He stared at Billy’s finger. The dirt under the nail. A map of the local terrain right there on the man’s hand. Earth. Mud. Decay.
“The line,” Alvin said. His voice was too flat. A monotonous drone. He had to remember to modulate it. To add the fake human warmth. “The line didn’t fry, Billy. It... choked.”
Billy lowered his hand, his brow furrowing into deep, leathered ridges. “Choked? What the hell you talking about, choked? The machine spit sparks, Alvin. Operator said it smelled like lightning hit the building, only there wasn’t a cloud in the sky.”
Alvin turned away. Walked back to the pine table.
On it sat his rig. To Billy, it looked like junk. A dismantled telegraph key, some zinc-carbon batteries leaking white crust, and coils of copper wire wrapped around a dried deer femur. A crude antenna. A straw to drink from a river they didn’t even know was flowing right over their heads.
He hadn’t meant to burn the Carson City wire. He’d just needed a ground. A physical anchor to bleed off the excess data-density from his last dive into the grid. The wire was too small. Too fragile. Like trying to force an ocean through a straw.
“They’re coming here, Alvin,” Billy hissed, stepping closer, the smell of stale whiskey and unwashed wool rolling off him. “The marshal. And those Pinkerton bastards the syndicate keeps on the payroll. They’re tossing every tent and shack from here to the creek. If they see this... this voodoo shit on your table...”
Alvin looked at the deer bone. The copper wire.
He didn’t feel fear. Fear was an organic chemical reaction—adrenaline, cortisol, a racing heart. He could feel those molecules starting to flood his bloodstream now, a slow, clumsy cascade. It was annoying. It dulled his clarity.
“We need to clear out,” Billy muttered, looking toward the grease-paper window. “Now.”
Alvings hand hovered over the key. He could still feel the residual hum in the metal. The grid was still out there, humming in the upper atmosphere, waiting.
“No,” Alvin said, his syntax tightening, the words coming shorter now. Harder. “Not out. Further in.”
Billy spat on the dirt floor. “Further in? Alvin, you’re talking crazy. There aingt no ‘further ing but a mine shaft, and they’ll trap us like rats down there.”
Alvin didn’t answer. He couldn’t waste the breath explaining.
Instead, his fingers dropped onto the key. Not to send a message. To draw one back.
He closed his eyes. The physical world receded—the smell of Billy’s wool coat, the damp chill of the shack, the distant thud of the stamp mill. He reached out with his mind, tapping into the residual current still bleeding through the copper coils wrapped around the deer bone.
A sharp, electric spike shot up his arm. His teeth clicked together, tasting copper and ozone.
In his mind’s eye, the dark shack vanished. The grid flared to life, a blinding lattice of cold, white light stretching across the void. But it was fractured now. The Carson City line disruption had left a jagged tear in the local network—a tear that was actively drawing the eyes of whatever authority governed the Upper Grid.
And closer to home, through the crude line he’d established, he felt them.
Two distinct currents moving toward the shack. Heavy. Deliberate. The physical pressure of boots hitting the mud outside, mirrored as dark, systemic anomalies in his mental map.
The marshal. And the Pinkerton.
“Alvin!” Billy yelped, his voice sounding miles away. “They’re at the gate!”
Alvings eyes snapped open, the white light of the grid lingering in his retinas like an afterimage. He grabbed the deer bone rig, ripping the copper leads from the zinc batteries. A small spark hissed, then died.
He stuffed the bone and the tangled wire into his canvas sack.
“We go through the back,” Alvin snapped, his voice tight, the human cadence entirely gone now. Just raw, survival-driven commands. “The floorboards. Loose behind the washbasin.”
Heavy footsteps thumped onto the wooden boardwalk outside. A fist slammed against the door, the wood groaning against the iron bolt.
“Open up in there! Marshal’s business!”
Billy looked at the door, then at Alvin, his face pale beneath the dirt.
Alvin didn’t wait. He dropped to his knees, hauled back the rotting pine boards beneath the washbasin, and slipped into the cold, damp dark beneath the shack just as the front door splintered inward.
Ghost Ants: Chapter 6
The first frost of the season did not fall from the sky; it crawled out of the stones.
By the time Noble reached the high ridges where the juniper trees grew stunted and twisted by the north wind, the air had turned thin and sharp as a bone needle. Behind him, the valley of the mining camps and the low draws where the Comanche kept their horses had disappeared into a sea of grey cloud. Ahead lay the backbone of the desert range—a world of black basalt, white quartz, and a sky that looked like old iron that had been scrubbed with sand.
He stripped at the timberline.
He took off the canvas trousers he had traded for three moons ago at the freight office; he took off the buffalo-hide leggings and the moccasins that carried the red mud of the creek bed. He laid them all across the lower branches of a dead pine, leaving his skin bare to the first, lazy flakes of snow that were beginning to drift down from the peaks.
The nakedness was not a gesture of pride. It was a shedding of the narrative. To go into the mountain with the clothes of the town or the grease of the camp was to bring the old conversations along, and Noble needed the world to be completely silent before he could hear what was coming down the line.
The cold hit him first as a burn, a white-hot iron pressed against his ribs and thighs, but as he walked higher into the shale, the pain settled into a dull, rhythmic thud that matched the beating of his heart. His skin turned the color of an old horn, his muscles tightening until his stride became short and mechanical.
Beside him, the white dog trotted through the loose stone.
It left no tracks in the light dust of the first snow. It didn’t pant. Its small, pointed ears were pricked toward the summit, and its pure white fur seemed to draw whatever faint light was left in the afternoon sky, making it look like a piece of the mountain that had broken off and started to walk.
“You’re a long way from the kitchen,” Noble muttered, his voice sounding small and dry against the vastness of the rock.
The dog didn’t look at him. It moved with that same bizarre, analytical confidence he’d seen in the sweat lodge, its small paws hovering just above the shale as if the earth were something it was only passing through on its way to a deeper connection.
As the sun dipped behind the western ridge, turning the snow-clouds into the color of a bruised lip, the hunger began to change shape. It was no longer a hollow feeling in the belly; it had become an architecture. Noble’s ribs felt like the willow poles of the lodge, and his mind was the hide cover, stretched tight and vibrating whenever the wind hit the high peaks.
He reached the place of the grandfather stones—a natural amphitheater of black rock near the summit where the wind didn’t blow, but rather circled like a hawk looking for a place to die.
He sat down in the center of the circle, his legs crossing into the lotus position he had learned in the hills west of Morro Bay, when the Cypress Grove had been his only wall. The snow was falling faster now, small, hard grains that didn’t melt on his shoulders but gathered in the creases of his collarbones like salt.
The vision did not come with a roar. It came with the sound of a key clicking in an empty room.
The white dog sat five paces away, its pale eyes fixed on the northern pass.
Through the grey curtain of the storm, three figures came walking down the ridge. They did not look like men, nor did they look entirely like animals, though they carried the shapes of both. They were tall—eight feet from the ground to the tops of their heads—and their movements had the heavy, deliberate grace of trees shifting in a gale.
The first was a white buffalo. Its shoulders were a massive hump of matted, pale wool that carried the scent of old grass and dried milk. But its horns were not horn; they were made of a dark, polished stone that looked like the basalt of the high peaks, and across its broad forehead were painted three thick, horizontal stripes of black and white.
The second was a brown coyote, walking on its hind legs with its head tilted to the side as if it were listening to a joke that no one else could hear. Its fur was the color of summer dust, but its long, narrow snout was ringed with those same black and white lines, regular and clean as the markings on a surveyor’s rod.
The third was a shadow man. He had no face, no eyes that Noble could see, only a tall, dark silhouette that seemed to absorb the falling snow as if he were made of old wool. But down the length of his long arms, from the shoulder to the tips of his five fingers, ran alternating bands of white and black—stripes that didn’t shift with the light but stayed perfectly fixed against the dark mass of his body.
They were the Thunderbirds, but they had come down from the sky to walk in the dirt. They carried the ancient weight of the upper air, but they smelled of zinc, iron, and the sharp, chemical heat of the batteries Alvin had been playing with in the mining camp.
The coyote spoke first. His voice didn’t come from his mouth; it came from the stones beneath Noble’s thighs, a low, gravelly vibration that sounded like a heavy drawer being pulled out of an old desk.
“You left your tobacco in the grove, Noble,” the coyote said. “The spirits drank the smoke, but they didn’t like the taste of the paper.”
“It was all I had,” Noble said, his teeth clicking together with the cold.
The white buffalo stepped closer, its massive breath coming out in huge, grey clouds that smelled of the ancient sea-bed. “The wire is stretching,” it said, its stone horns catching the dark gleam of the sky. “The man in the valley—the one who looks at his hands as if they belong to a stranger—is digging a hole under the mountain. He thinks he’s looking for coal, but he’s looking for us.”
“Alvin,” Noble said.
“He calls himself that,” the shadow man whispered. His voice was like the sound of dry grass dragging across a grave. “But his name is nothing but a click on the copper. He is the thief who lost his shadow, and you are the shadow that has lost its man.”
The three eight-foot figures stood in a semicircle around Noble, their black and white stripes vibrant against the grey wash of the storm. They did not move like creatures of flesh; they moved like symbols that had been carved into the rock by an old hand and then forgotten until the rain washed the dirt away.
The white dog walked into the center of the circle, stopping between Noble and the white buffalo. It looked up at the giant beast, then turned its head to look at Noble.
“The small one is the guide,” the coyote said, its long ears twitching toward the pass. “But he doesn’t know the way back. He only knows the way further in. If you follow him, the snow will cover your tracks before the morning comes.”
“I have thirty horses in the draw,” Noble said, his voice growing fainter as the cold reached his heart. “Shy Deer is waiting for the meat.”
“Shy Deer belongs to the dirt,” the shadow man said, his striped arms lifting toward the dark ceiling of the sky. “She knows the whale-bone and the knife, but she doesn’t know the iron. The iron is ours, Noble. We built the lattice before your grandfathers had names for the stars.”
The white buffalo lowered its massive head until its striped muzzle was only inches from Noble’s face. The smell of the ancient grass grew thicker, suffocatingly sweet, until Noble couldn’t see the mountain or the snow anymore. There was only the black and white pattern of the beast’s skin, repeating itself over and over until it looked like the long page of a telegraph receiver running out into the dark.
“Go back to the camp,” the buffalo rumbled. “Tell the one who clicks the key that the line is open. But tell him the ground is heavy. If he bleeds too much of the light into the mud, the mountain will close its mouth.”
The vision began to fracture, the three giant figures melting into the grey lines of the falling snow. The white dog remained for a moment longer, its pale eyes two clean pricks of light in the darkness, before it too turned and trotted into the storm, leaving Noble alone on the cold stone, his bare skin covered in a thin, white shroud of frost.
The cold ceased to be a sensation and became an agreement.
Noble sat within the circle of the grandfather stones, his legs locked into that tight, defensive lotus pattern, while the snow piled in the hollows of his collarbones and the small crevices between his toes. The three eight-foot entities—the white buffalo, the brown coyote, and the shadow man—did not leave the mountaintop so much as they became the structural pillars of his delirium. Their black and white stripes vibrated against the gray wash of the blizzard, looking less like paint and more like gaps in the world where the sky had been slit open with a razor.
The shadow man stepped closer, his long, banded arms casting an impossible, rhythmic shadow across the snow despite the lack of a sun. “You think you are the hunter, Noble,” he said, his voice carrying that flat, unmodulated chime of a telegraph wire under tension. “But you are only the iron pole holding the wire above the mud. The man in the camp—the one who smells of zinc—he is the one drawing the current. He is pulling us down into the valleys where the mules die.”
“He doesn’t know this place,” Noble whispered, his tongue feeling like a dry wedge of pine in his mouth. “He doesn’t know the cypress or the smoke.”
“He knows the geometry,” the coyote barked, a dry, rattling sound that caused a small shelf of shale to slide down the mountain behind them. “He knows the lines that do not bend. He builds a cage out of copper, and he thinks he can trap the thunder inside it. We are the thunder, Noble. We don’t live in the wire. We just use it to walk.”
The white dog trotted back out of the curtain of white, its fur completely clean of snow. It stopped at the edge of Noble’s knee, its small head cocked toward the shadow man. For the first time, it didn’t look analytical; it looked hungry. Its small jaws opened, and instead of a tongue, Noble saw the glint of a dark, iron gear turning slowly behind its teeth—a tiny piece of a clockwork universe ticking away in the belly of an animal.
“Look at his mouth,” the coyote mocked, circling the edge of the stones. “Shy Deer told you, didn’t she? The woman with the whale-bone knows when the iron is in the grass. She knows that when the white dog comes, the old things have to pack up their bundles and move into the deep canyons.”
“Why?” Noble asked, the frost now forming a stiff, white mask over his cheeks, locking his expression into that of a stone carving.
“Because the white dog doesn’t have a grandfather,” the white buffalo rumbled, its massive striped head dropping so low that its hot, sweet breath melted the snow around Noble’s thighs. “It was born in the machine. It was born on the long page that the telegraph operator reads when the office is dark. It is the ghost that lives in the code, and it’s come to see if the dirt up here is soft enough to bury a world.”
The shadow man reached down, his striped fingers hovering just above the crown of Noble’s head. A sharp, electric hum passed between them—a violent blue spark that smelled of lightning and burnt wool.
In that instant, Noble’s mind shifted away from the mountain. He wasn’t on the basalt ridge anymore. He was looking through Alvings eyes down in the valley. He saw the grease-paper window of the log shack; he saw Billy’s dirt-caked finger pointing at his face; he saw the loose floorboards behind the washbasin where the dark, cold mud waited underneath. The two worlds were no longer separate territories divided by two hundred miles of scrub and pine. They were the same room, and someone was slowly closing the door.
“The line is twin,” the shadow man whispered into Noble’s ear, his voice now sounding exactly like the click of the iron key behind the partition in Carson City. “One thread for the man who clicks. One thread for the man who bleeds. If the ground fails, you both go down into the dark under the floorboards.”
The three giant figures began to turn, their black and white stripes repeating in his retinas until they formed the long, linear tracks of an engine going over a mountain pass. The white dog sat down at the center of the pattern, its pale eyes the last things to go before the gray winter sky closed up its seams and left him alone in the dark.
The silence that followed the shadow man’s voice was thicker than the snow.
Noble’s chest didn’t seem to move anymore. The frost had formed a clear, brittle shell over his ribs, turning his torso into a white cage that held the small, fading ember of his life. He was no longer cold; the cold had reached the bone and become an absol

